nucmednet Chapter 133 Brother 5, I like your excuse.
Chapter 133 Brother 5, I like your excuse.
In the other courtyard, Chen An saw from the window that Nana and Hongdou left for the restaurant. He breathed a sigh of relief, sat back on the sofa, listed the outline and details of Damai's serialized novel, and thought about how to help this girl later.
In the room, Da Mai once again sat in front of the computer in a daze. He was not thinking about the plot in his mind, but was thinking about what happened this morning.
The phone dinged with a message alert. Da Mai quickly took the phone and took a look at it. He turned to the mirror and sorted it out carefully. Then he calmed himself down and walked towards Room 5 with the computer.
The door was open. It was the first time for Da Mai to enter a room with a member of the opposite sex, which made her feel strange and expectant. What would Xiaowu's room be like?
She was stunned as soon as she entered the room. The room was very clean and tidy, and there was a faint fragrance in the air, which made her feel particularly comfortable. The layout was not very complicated, but it was very warm. It seemed that her guess was correct. Brother Xiaowu seemed cynical, but he was actually a person who lived a very refined life.
Seeing how Damai was dressed, Chen An couldn't help but feel happy. As expected, women dress up to please themselves. He greeted her. "Come here, Damai. I specially made some scented tea. How about you try it?"
Da Mai walked over and sat down. From this angle he could see the entire room and couldn't help but take a few more glances.
Chen An placed a cup of scented tea in front of Da Mai and asked, "How is it? Is it different from what you imagined?"
"Ah, Brother Xiaowu, your room is really clean, much better than mine. I often put things in a mess, and I have to look for them when I need them." Da Mai looked at the desk at the head of the bed and couldn't help but exclaimed, "Brother Xiaowu, do you like reading books?"
"It's okay, I just bought a few books to kill time."
Barley stood up and walked over. She was now like a sponge, eager to know more about this man.
Chen An's heart moved, and he also stood up and followed...
"Brother Xiaowu, you are also reading this book. I have read this book..." Damai picked up a book and turned around happily, only to find that Brother Xiaowu was standing behind him.
"I have read this book three times and I can basically recite it by heart."
"Really, Brother Xiaowu, you are so amazing, aren't you?"
Chen An stretched out a hand, gently lifted Da Mai's chin and said teasingly, "Is it impressive? I don't think so."
"It's really amazing..." Damai's eyelashes fluttered, and she was a little nervous. Was Brother Xiaowu going to kiss her?
Chen An looked into Da Mai's eyes and asked, "Da Mai, you three, didn't you discuss this this morning? I still feel full in my stomach."
"Ah?" Da Mai was a little confused. Isn't this plot wrong? But thinking about Chen An's look at that time, he quickly explained, "No, there is no Xiao Wu brother. When I got up, the two of them were already in the kitchen, and they were almost done. I wanted to make rice noodles for you, but then I just cut some fruit."
Chen An looked at Da Mai with suspicion and joked, "Is that so? I was saying that you, Da Mai, would definitely not deliberately embarrass me."
Chen An moved his body slightly forward, and Da Mai involuntarily stepped back a little, supporting himself on the desk with both hands and closing his eyes nervously.
The imagined kiss did not come, I felt fingers brushing my face gently, and the words of Brother Xiaowu rang in my ears, "Don't be in a hurry to put on makeup next time, look, it's all over the place."
Da Mai opened his eyes and felt his face getting a little hot. Da Mai, Da Mai, why do you always think about such sad things?
"Well, are they still available now?" Barley asked awkwardly.
"Let me take a closer look..."
As soon as Da Mai raised her head, she felt her lips being kissed fiercely. Before she could react, Chen An let her go, took a step back, and said teasingly, "Da Mai, after thinking about it, I think you are still responsible for this matter. After all, if you know about it but don't report it, does that count as complicity? So I'll give you a small punishment. If you are an accomplice next time..."
Da Mai was so embarrassed by Chen An's manipulation that her face turned red and her heartbeat accelerated. She rolled her eyes at Chen An and said, "Brother Xiaowu, your excuse is not good at all, but, but I like..."
"What do you like?" Chen An blinked, looking very confused.
Da Mai stamped his feet in anger, "Brother Xiaowu, you are so bad, you know..."
Chen An touched his nose awkwardly and changed the subject: "Well, Barley, I sorted out some content related to your novel, which will definitely be helpful to you."
"Really? That's wonderful! It made me so worried."
"Come here, let me tell you something." Chen An took Da Mai's hand and sat down on the sofa together. He then adjusted the angle of the computer and said, "Look, this is the outline and storyline I made after reading your novel."
Da Mai looked at it with admiration and said, "Brother Xiaowu, you are so meticulous, aren't you? I haven't done it so thoroughly myself."
"That's normal. Although you don't have any problems with your writing style, you're obviously not familiar enough with suspenseful romance novels, so it's not scientific to list these in advance."
Da Mai nodded in agreement. "I actually know this, but I just had this inspiration at the time, and then I made an outline and started writing. Otherwise, I wouldn't have been stuck all the time."
"I read your novel as a whole and sorted out the story lines you wrote. I found that the main reason why you are stuck at the moment is still the details."
"Look, according to the current story development, after sorting out the clues of the previous two murder cases, you have already become suspicious of this semi-abandoned factory."
"The foreshadowing here is very good. Maybe you wrote this part where the two people accidentally fell into the cave just to add a little more description to the emotional line."
"But look here, when the two fell into the cave, there was water in the cave, and the heroine also injured her foot. This is very helpful for the subsequent plot development. After some efforts, the two escaped from the predicament and came to hide near the factory."
Da Mai quickly said, "I originally planned to have the hero and heroine go in together to investigate the situation, and then if there are some dangers later, we can use tension and excitement to better stimulate their relationship."
"It's a good idea, but I think it's not a good idea for two people to go in together. You can rely on the foreshadowing you laid out earlier. For example, when you fell into the cave, your cell phones got soaked and damaged, and you had no way of contacting support at that time."
"The heroine sprained her ankle and couldn't move around easily. The only way out was for the hero to run to the nearest place and find a place where he could make a phone call."
"In order not to drag down the hero, and to keep an eye on every move here, the heroine chose to hide where she was..."
Barley touched his chin and said, "Although it is feasible to write it this way, the two of us are not sure now. There must be something wrong here, right?"
"So this is the key point. Not long after the heroine hides and the hero leaves, a car suddenly drives over, and three ferocious men violently drag the two women. Here we must focus on describing the violent behavior of the three men, and we can appropriately add two lines of thought-provoking dialogue, such as 'If you don't listen, I'll kill you and feed you to the dogs'..."