Chapter 38 Finalizing the lyrics of the original song
Chapter 38 Finalizing the lyrics of the original song
"Zhou Muyan, you and I will be responsible for composing the music together; Duan Xiao, you and I will be responsible for arranging the music together."
Considering that composing and arranging music was difficult, and Zhou Muyan and Duan Xiao had no relevant experience, Su Yinian wrote down the words "melody", "catchable", and "EDM" on a blank page.
"We'll discuss the specific details later. Zhou Muyan, Duan Xiao, go back and rest first. Think about these words and see if you have any good ideas. In your free time, watch more stage videos of seniors who have already debuted to get a feel for it."
After saying this, Su Yinian looked up at the wall clock. It was almost eleven o'clock in the evening.
She planned slowly: "Come back tomorrow morning at ten o'clock to compose and arrange music with me. I will be waiting for you here."
Zhou Muyan: "Okay, Captain."
Duan Xiao: "OK, let's go first."
Zhou Muyan and Duan Xiao obeyed Su Yinian's instructions 100%, packed up their belongings, and left the exclusive classroom of Creative Team A.
The door of the classroom opened and closed again, and Su Yinian looked up at Guan Qiu.
"Prisoner, you and I will be responsible for the choreography together."
She said, "Time is limited, and we are doing the choreography and lyrics at the same time. While I am discussing the lyrics with Xu Qiu, you should stay and listen, and think about whether there are any choreography moves that are suitable for the lyrics, and record them first."
"No problem, Captain!" The prisoner agreed readily.
Su Yinian's impartial assignment of tasks made this half-baked trainee feel valued, and he inexplicably aroused a sense of motivation and pride in his heart.
There is a reason why Xu Qiu's lyric writing level is rated S superior by the top-stream system.
During the whole night, he wrote down three versions of lyrics in different styles during the discussion with Su Yinian.
The first version is dark in style, with bold words and a strong sense of yandere. This is Su Yinian's personal favorite version, and the lyrics are the most exciting to understand.
One version was about a sadomasochistic love story, so sad that it was heartbreaking. After this version of the lyrics came out, it made a mature man in prison burst into tears and he used up three large packs of tissues.
One version is literary, with gorgeous words and lyrics that emphasize fate, using obscure metaphors to express the setting. Su Yinian doesn't like this version.
Because she prefers to be simple and straightforward rather than go around in circles.
however--
At 9:30 in the morning, it is time for creative instructor Meng Jia to come to Creative Class A to teach.
Su Yinian handed in three versions of the lyrics with very different styles, and sat around the conference table with Xu Qiu and Guan Qiu, waiting for Meng Jia's comments.
Meng Jia's face was solemn as he slowly flipped through the papers, commenting on the three versions of the lyrics one by one.
"The first version was well written, but it couldn't be published because the lyrics were too revealing and wouldn't pass security review."
Meng Jia looked a little regretful. He put the first version of the lyrics on the table and turned to look at the second version.
As she watched, she couldn't help but reveal a deeply shocked expression, and said with deep emotion: "How deep must the emotional trauma be to write such heart-wrenching lyrics? You three...are not simple."
The not-so-simple prisoner scratched his head shyly, not trying to take credit. "Teacher Meng, the lyrics were written by Xu Qiu, and I was responsible for the choreography."
The extraordinary Xu Qiu was suddenly called upon, blushing as he explained, "These three versions of the lyrics were all ideas from Captain Su, I was just responsible for turning his inspirations into beautiful sentences."
The truly extraordinary Su Yinian was still thinking about her favorite first version that was rejected: "...Is it true that the first version cannot be used?"
In the Yunxiao Continent where she originally lived, it was common for cousins to agree to practice dual cultivation together. Although dual cultivation between siblings was unethical, similar settings were very popular in the Yunxiao Continent's storybooks.
Apart from practicing and taking care of the sect's affairs, the leader of the Xiaoyao Sect spends a lot of time watering the flowers and taking his disciples for a walk.
When she had nothing to do, she would sneak into the Sutra Library to read the storybooks. She bought the storybooks by sneaking down the mountain. In order to maintain the cold image of the head of the sect, she would wrap the storybooks with the cover of the cultivation secret book...
"Is it not possible to modify some lyrics into English?" Su Yinian was unwilling and refused to give up.
She picked up the first version of the lyrics, and inspiration struck her, so she picked up a pen and circled it.
"These sensitive words can be deleted, and these sentences can be changed into English. Based on the original setting, add 'the desire for unrequited love'. All of this is 'my' imagination as a loser."
"This should be able to pass the security review, right?" Su Yinian handed the revised first version of the lyrics to Meng Jia.
Meng Jia took it and looked down, thoughtfully.
"Well... you can give it a try, but would you consider using the third version of the lyrics? I think the writing style of the third version is OK, and it's suitable for creating a gentle lyrical song."
"Let's not consider the lyrical song. The chances of winning against Xie Wenyu are too low." Su Yinian shook his head without thinking, his thoughts clear.
"Besides, lyrical songs have very high vocal requirements for each member. Zhou Muyan and Duan Xiao are more suitable for rap than vocals."
"Not bad, contestant Su Yinian. It's only the first day, but you've already figured out the strengths and weaknesses of your teammates. You have the potential to be a team leader."
Meng Jia smiled and said, "Since you already have a relatively clear idea of creation, I won't interfere too much."
"You guys can polish the first version of the lyrics internally. If you think it's okay, Su Yinian, come find me in the Creative Class B next door. I'll take you and Xie Wenyu to find the relevant staff to conduct a safety review of the lyrics."
"Come see me at half past ten." Meng Jia stood up and prepared to leave.
Su Yinian, Xu Qiu, and Guan Qiu also stood up and said goodbye politely. "Teacher Meng, take care."
"Ah, right."
Meng Jia walked to the door, suddenly stopped, and smiled evilly. "Su Yinian, your other three teachers said that you are welcome to go to other classes when you are free."
She blinked and said, "Seize the opportunity. If you don't understand something during the creation process, ask. This is your privilege."
After Meng Jia left, Su Yinian mobilized his strong execution ability and discussed with Xu Qiu to modify the first version of the lyrics.
Feeling that there was no problem, she looked at Xu Qiu and Guan Qiu and said, "You have worked hard. Go back and rest quickly. You can come back here at 7 o'clock in the evening."
"Captain, aren't you going to take a rest?" Seeing that Su Yinian was planning to work non-stop, Guan Qiu looked at the faint bruise above her teardrop mole and spoke with a worried tone.
"Captain, your body can't handle this. Come back to the dormitory with us and rest for a while."
"It's okay, I'm not sleepy now."
Su Yinian raised the lyrics in his hand, and a faint arc appeared on his lips. "I have the lyrics. I just suddenly thought of a good idea that can be used in the prelude of "DNA."
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